Comments : Forgive me for my weakness.

  • This is a good poem... more like a begging desire to have the one you love back but I've been there before... there just was no fireplace... lol.. great poem girl... keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    Oh my god i red your poem while listening song Espen Lind-Unloved..i really wanted cry :( nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    The way you wrote it was good and I really loved it.
    Good Job.