My Dying Breath

by Men   Mar 6, 2008


This midnight sky is closing in
My mind so clouded where can I begin

I feel naught, but a blade upon my wrist
Please embrace me with your bloody kiss

Your voice so close - yet so far away
Just take these pills and make things okay

Leave me alone - please let me fall down
Don't help me up - I'll die on the ground

Listen as I plea and watch as I beg
For you to tie up my arms and legs

Then watch cold waves engulf me
As sands fall upon my feet

As your hand takes my breath
Can you guess what cause my death?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    This is totally amazing!!! You have written it so well. I was carried away. Keep on writing...you are talented!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pin Butterfly-

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    :O amazing. :] the flow was flawless and you had nice descriptions. Your emotions were expressed very nicely and the piece was perfectly written. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    I love this so emotional it's excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was very well-written! The flow was amazing, the word choice was excellent, and the concept was intriguing... Great write! 5/5

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