What a great poem...it has everything...but the emotion stands out for me...good jo...5/5,....xoxo

Damn, gabby after this i give up writing my own song. but stormyangel u got talent!

Thats soooooooooooo good. i loved the whole thing. i'd love to hear this song sung :P wow.

WOW! That's quite cool. I like the repetition, it just adds a different touch to it. But it's definately a good start. Personally I find it really hard to write songs, but that's my own opinion. 5/5