No Matter How Far

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Mar 7, 2008


I want to fly away
Touch the sky
Forget all my troubles
Say goodbye

I want to walk on clouds
Feel weightless and carefree
I want to forget the world
And remember me

I want to laugh again
And warm in the sun
I want to remember what it's like
To just have some fun

I want to wish upon stars
Watch them shine
Put one in my pocket
To keep as mine

I want to let my hair down
And just unravel
On a rainbow comet
I want to travel

I finally wake up from my dream
And stare up at the stars
I can dream of anything
It doesn't matter how far

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by DaydreamerSki

    This was really good. I've never read a nature poem from you and it turned out really good. 5/5

    ->Juliea<-

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is cute. Good flow and a thought provoking fantasy. Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I finally wake up from my dream
    And stare up at the stars
    I can dream of anything
    It doesn't matter how far

    i loved d last two lines...

    very beautiful and cute poem... liked d simplicity...

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Good poem. I did notice however there were alot of i's and words like that... try and minimise the use those words and it'll sound so much better..

    I want to forget the world
    And remember me

    I want to laugh again
    And warm in the sun

    ^^These lines here didnt really do it for me though. "warm in the sun" maybe rephrase that? And, 'and remember me' seems a bit out of place too.

    You had good flow and rhyming though. And I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by elizabeth

    If you dream it you can do it... i love that it mad my very bad day.. hah... just know by reading this... you helped someone smile

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