So do I - keep up the good writes. peace

THAT WAS SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL (like you [dont deny it])

Aww...very sweet, someday you'll have everthing you want *SMILE*

If you dream it you can do it... i love that it mad my very bad day.. hah... just know by reading this... you helped someone smile

Good poem. I did notice however there were alot of i's and words like that... try and minimise the use those words and it'll sound so much better..

I want to forget the world
And remember me

I want to laugh again
And warm in the sun

^^These lines here didnt really do it for me though. "warm in the sun" maybe rephrase that? And, 'and remember me' seems a bit out of place too.

You had good flow and rhyming though. And I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!

I finally wake up from my dream
And stare up at the stars
I can dream of anything
It doesn't matter how far

i loved d last two lines...

very beautiful and cute poem... liked d simplicity...

This is cute. Good flow and a thought provoking fantasy. Nice job!

This was really good. I've never read a nature poem from you and it turned out really good. 5/5

->Juliea<-