Wow.
this was REALLY good.
and i thought i could write.

Good poem, except... "dark" and "night" are relevant. Night is dark, therefore... it is obvious. :) So maybe remove the "dark" part.

As the light dims,
Into a night sky,
She sits staring out her window,
Left alone to cry.

Good word choice, however. Very expressive. 5/5

I agree with the previous comment about "dark" and "night" but asides from that i loved this poem, u really captured the essence of the emotions and pain! well done! take care!!

Is this true???