Wow, that was a very STRONG poem, it has alot of heart in it...keep it up 5/5

Thx, im greatful for any comments guys so feel free - good or bad there's always room for improvement

You did a great job on this, there was a lot of heart and emotion to it. Your a great poet,keep it up.5/5

Very well-written! The flow was good, the word choice was good, and the concept was great! Not to mention you're opening 2 lines:

"I'm torn between me and myself,
I don't know which one to take from the shelf,"

Were amazing!

5/5 again! Great work...

This is good. I can see that you would have mixed feelings for the girl. You truely love her but you wonder if you should keep loving her and whether it is truely worth it all.

This poem still gets to me kid.
Everything I read this I still get teary eyed, just as the night you sent it to me.
You're an amazing writer and poet, don't stop, even if people don't get some of the stuff you write.
Love you kiddo.
<3

Thats really , really good ; - )

The emotion in this is great...and I like how this poem makes you think. You're an awesome poet...5/5

I like this one! Nice write. Some of your poems are like short stories nevertheless it’s full of emotions and it’s simple...

I can feel all the emotion you put in it. great work:-) 5/5. wat more can i say?

Wow awesome piece. Amazing word choice. I really like it.