Romeo and Juliet, and a Bullet to End

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Mar 7, 2008


Romeo loves Juliet
2 lovers, 1 story
no one will forget

Both of them came
From two separate worlds
Romeo could've had
All of the girls
But he wanted the one
He couldn't forget
He wanted her since
The day they first met

He thought about her
When she wasn't near
They planned to escape
To a place far from here

But this is where Shakespeare
Made a mistake
Juliet killed him
Death by heart break

She chained him up
said "baby won't you stay?"
Kissed him and bit his lip
Says we've got a game to play

He cried and said
I thought you loved me
She said "don't worry romeo
This is just a suicide
Thats how the story goes"

She opened her flask
Out poured arsenic
A bitter smile and she hissed
You feeling a little sick!

Romeo wakes up
In a cheap motel
Next to a girl
He thinks named Michelle

It was just a dream
Stupid love book
It's was poor Juliet's heart
That he coldly took

Juliet walks in
Cold gun in her hand
She is in shock
For she can't understand
He said that he loved her
But she found them in bed
Put that gun to her lover
And shot that bastrd dead

In tears on the floor
This was no suicide pact
He broke her heart
And she wanted it back

She picked up the weapon
Put it to her head
Screaming "I loved you"
One bullet...shes dead

Juliet loved romeo
But she found him in bed
2 bullets, 3 lovers
Thats why they are dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    Wow. crazy and twisted. interesting write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    Omg this is soo crazy!!!!! wow!!!! very....origional. i absolutly luv it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Amazing poem, it's soo amazing!!! this is a good twist to the original romeo and juliet.
    1000/1000!!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    You know this is on my faves now, right?

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    WOW. just wow jesse. i honestly don't know what else to say. you freakin made the most talkative girl on the planet speechless. damn