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by StandStill   Mar 7, 2008


On a desolate plain lies a quiet girl
in her heart is pain
she is
searching
searching
searching
but for what, she does not know.
and a wind blows on the grey plain
with the wind comes something new
haunting
and the wind
howls
howls
howls
it tries to take her away
that quiet girl
with her unknown pain
and she lets it
and across the plains she flies
far away
o'er deserts
and forrests
and colorful places
but she keeps
going
going
going
never to touch those colors
to taste the sweet fruits
to see the fireflies
to hear the cicadas
and she is hurled upward
and now she can't see
she is
blind
blind
blind
around her she feels a whirling
and then a grey nothingness
and the wind sets her down
gently
gently
gently
and she hears something
something new
and strange
and beautiful
and it makes her heart
beat
beat
beat
for the first time
in a long time
and the blood begins to move
and she runs to the softly playing music
the lullaby that
sings
sings
sings
and she runs to a cliff
she sees her heart's desire
the lullaby
the love
the beauty
lie just over the cliff
a short jump
and she takes the leap
and suddenly
she is
falling
falling
falling
into a black nothingness
nobody to catch her

i don't even know what to say...i don't know if i like it, dislike it. dunno. just kinda came out.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    When i read this

    and she is hurled upward
    and now she can't see

    i thought she was already dead but now it semms liek it was almost foreshadowing her death
    These poems are soooooo good.

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    It was good, i like how you repeated the important stuff
    >SheDevil<

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    There's alot of saddness and pain in this.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Damn gabby, u should write mor like that, it was amazing.

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