Damn gabby, u should write mor like that, it was amazing.

There's alot of saddness and pain in this.....

It was good, i like how you repeated the important stuff
>SheDevil<

When i read this

and she is hurled upward
and now she can't see

i thought she was already dead but now it semms liek it was almost foreshadowing her death
These poems are soooooo good.