by Chris Mar 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Why did this happen to me? |
by Zvetty
Life goes on |
This is really good, the refrain is amazing, and you managed to get a lot of feeling in there. I think you might have done this, cause it was the end...but you changed the rhyme pattern at the very end--there's two ways I see it--1. It's sort of a thing in a minor key, like at the end of a song or 2. you could find things to rhyme :P |