I love it. Sexy, and a bit of flirtliness in there. It's great.
*5*
~SheDevil~

Bravo *claps* 10 outa 10!
Wow! undescribable how amazing that was!
(pardon me saying this) but I got hrony just reading it, it was that good and desriptive.
Great job!

This is nice, " punishing me for being your desire, making me your slave " i really liked that part. " thoughts of your lips slowly kissing down, memories of my breasts getting all your attention " thats well thought of.. Generally no erotic words in your poem but it definately sparks the heat. Keep it up.