Great write. These types of poems can be very difficult to make them have a meaning. But you've done beautifully! Great job! 5/5

I have never heard of a "Lanturne"
But I like it. It is simple, yet can be filled with so much. You were very thorough in getting your point across that your pain was caused by someone. And in this short writing, the pain you feel could go on forever. And I like how that is shown. (not good that you have pain, but you get the point)

5/5