My death

by cory   Mar 7, 2008


When I die I wonder
What is it that they'll see?
Will they see a coward?
Or someone urning to be free?

My memory's in pieces
My anger lies in dust
Even my best moment's
were just objects of my lust

But if i find a way
I doubt I ever will
I'll need someone to feed me
I'm not just talking about a pill

Will they really help me ?
Or just build me for a fall
This thought is what scares me
more than anything at all.

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  • 16 years ago

    by deaddarkwolf

    I know how that is I wounder that to will they see me for the mistakets or the things that where good and how it will end up I like it alot my fav lines are
    My memory's in pieces
    My anger lies in dust
    Even my best moment's
    were just objects of my lust
    ^^ plz keep writing I rated on ur newest one I'll rate on this one to ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Beautiful. has a good rhythm and is steady but keeps me reading on and on, excellent use of words, nothing to strong and over powering but just right. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lovemehard

    I love this poem its so good .....plz read mine and comment mine thx

  • 16 years ago

    by samantha

    This is good

  • 16 years ago

    by Happy without a reason

    Good job ^^

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