This was a really great poem. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. The beginning shows a troubled soul and how they do not think they have friends, but then they look inside and see that they do.

The third line of the 4th stanza was somewhat off flow and it was difficult for me to follow. Other than that, it was a really good poem. 5/5

Aw, this is such a good poem. I especially loved it because I know how friendship really is. This is exactly how I feel towards my best friend Ericka. It shows a lot of feeling and emotion. The flow worked perfectly. I can absolutely feel what you feel towards your friends. Great job!!!

.:CiNdY:.

This was absolutely beautiful, and it truly made me smile as I had the pleasure of reading about somebody who is so thankful for the friendships they have. It's wonderful that you've managed to overcome the heartache in your past that you and your friends endured, and I really hope that the friendship amongst you all continues to grow in the future.

Beautifully done. :)

Aww this poem was so sweet, what a great way to say thank you to your friends for being there for you. You're very lucky to have people that stick by you no matter what, I can completely relate to that which makes this poem even better. The flow was sometimes a little off but otherwise this was a really sweet, honest poem that came straight from the heart.

Em xXx

Wow I just loved how you began this because you took me back to a time were I was suffering of depression because of lost friends. The way you described everything was just flawless. The transition from sad to happy was a little too quick for me and I would have liked it if you described how your friends abandoned you a little more in detail to make it flow a lil better. Your expressions of your two best friends was just beautiful and inspirational to read. Its an amazing thing to have when you find those people that will stick by your side through everything and it seems you have so I loved the happy ending. Well done *5/5*

Sometimes the flow was a little off but that's okay. I love the message of this poem. I think (as AblissfulDREAMER stated before) that the transition from sad to happy was a bit quick. But other than that.. it was a great write. 5/5 from me.