Life

by angel sent from god   May 20, 2004


What is life,
Life gives you pain,
pain that is so strong it doesn't go away,
Life is hard but no one said it would be easy.
You told me that life will get better,
I asked you when,
You told me to give it time,
But time can't wait forever,
You told me I would be happy soon,
But how soon is soon? It isn't soon enough.
You tell me that I am strong but how long do you think that will last?,
I feel that i can no longer be strong.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jeri

    i liked thecontent of your poem, but i do not feel that it was put on paper in the best way. you have to work on your syllable coult, for that is what made it unpleasant to the eye, yet i love what you have to say. if you work on the structure a bit, i think that it will turn into a beautiful poem.

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