Comments : This life of mine

  • 16 years ago

    by shadow

    Hmm, wow. I dont know if this really going on right now, of if this is just another way for you to express past experiences, but either way, it upsets me you once had an addiction. It's tough to live with and sometimes it helps to tlk to a friend about it whenever the urge is there. I'm here for you. Im that friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    WOW...very good write. Loved everything about. Especially the emotion of it. The voice was one that cannot be matched.

    "i am drowning in the sense of my addictions"
    ^^my fav line (after I read it, I went back and read it again)

    Overall, perfectly and beautifully written =)
    5/5

    xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx