Comments : Nature's nectar

  • 16 years ago

    by Gness

    Wow a true work of art

    I near your budding flower
    And drink the nectar as it flows

    my faviroute line you really described it naturally

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Great poem!
    you are really good at describing things :)
    5/5 from me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow truely indeed u leave me speechless.the poem's flow was juz smooth like a flowing nectar. I must say this is a fine masterpiece