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by Raychil Mar 7, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Quiet, quiet, quiet That will be my tone Hush, hush, hush My thoughts will be unknown If I call My voice will break If I think It will awake I cannot cry Or I will feel I cannot speak Or it will be real I want to tell No, I can't let them know I want to break down No, I can't let it show My eyes are so heavy My heart is so slow My body's so weak Why can't I let go? I am dying And hope has left me I am falling And no one can see My thoughts are so rapid That my head won't stop spinning This battle is pointless There's no way I'm winning Pain has consumed Blood will flow Maybe I'm wrong But at least I let go Quiet, quiet, quiet That is my fate Hush, hush, hush Besides its too late.
by Natalie
Nice work. It sorta reminds me of one of my older poems I wrote. Good flow, and rhyming. Loved the emotion put into this!
by Stefan
Shhhh