Courtney
Welcome back. What a great piece to come back with. Love the imagery.

You are the key to life,
Hear this inmate's plea,
Darling, grant this wish,
Just love and be loved by me.

I really loved the ending of your poem. It is funny how some love can make you feel like a prisoner, and others make you soar :)
Great job!
Love Cindy

Courtney,

This is the first poem I have read by you and it's about my favorite subject, lol!
It's sweet and the very last sentence I love best because this is really what it all comes down too...

hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

"You are the key to life,
Hear this inmate's plea,
Darling, grant this wish,
Just love and be loved by me. "

Beautiful words of love.....nicely writtten!!!

Wow!!.. this was breathtaking! Plenty of expressed emotions in this wonderful piece. I also liked the ending very much and found it quite easy to relate too. Fantastic job!!