"And I won't lie: there's so much blame but I'll admit that I feel the slightest bit better when I place it all on you." Lovely, truly truly lovely!
"You were just a misleading truth that took too much trouble in dragging me down from my cloud.
When I was capable of surviving on my own. I swear." Hopeful and pleading it sounded.
Very well put together! Good job!!! Great read! 5/5
Nicole

Wow...
I'm impressed.
((Wow, again)).

Excellently written poem, endlessly powerful. I can relate to this in a way. Truly brilliant, it left me in awe. Creative and deep piece, filled with superbly expressed emotions.
I love your writing style, it is very original.
I truly can't express how much I like this poem.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading your amazing work!

5/5 from me

Oh my that last line hit me like BANG. I believe it was a perfect way to end your amazingly wonderful poem. Starting off with the title ... I was hooked. It captured my attention and urged me to read more and oh boy I was not disappointed ... this poem was so heartbreakingly sad yet filled with such courage ... oh I loved it!.

I love your beginning line because it puts me in a setting I'm familar with and you descibe it all so clearly its beautiful to imagine. I loved the band-aid part where you go " I need one no two no three..." I think that was brillant and I've never seen it done before which made it even more amazing.

The beginning line to your second stanza was flawless. I loved your word choice because it fit the mood perfectly and made eveerything flow flawlesly. I loved your use of "chaotic mess" Amazing combination of words that blew me away.

Again I just loved your last line. Flawless piece of poetry my dear. A well deserved *5/5*

Oh boy . I am feeling this way right now . Man it sucks . && I am writing a poem with the band aids thing too . Lol . I loved it though . The emotion is raw and real . Which I love . The intensity is like jumping at me .

Oh boy . It was short but held a lot . Sarcasm and all . I loved the long lines . I am a huge fan of those . And you my dear did it quite well , if I do say so myself . Lol . Overall , another amazing poem from you . Sorry I didn ` t do a full blown comment . Great job .
5 . 5

Amber .
Sorry I didn ' t do a full blown comment .