by 3Li0R4 Mar 8, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I love you but do you love me? |
by MEMI
Wow i know how you feel |
Full of emotion and you obviously want somebody to know how you feel, but you're afraid that they don't feel the same way. you put into words what a lot of people feel, and you did it very successfully and you did leave out a rhyme scheme but sometimes a poem doesn't need to rhyme. I think you did an awesome job and i hope you write more like it ^^ |