This poem flowed beautifully, it has emotions that show very nicely. The words are perfect and you wrote this wonderfully.5/5

Wonderful flow, amazing poem,very sweet. 5/5

Once again, you've brought a smile to my face. You are just such an honest writer, your poems so beautiful and sweet even if they are sad. I'm going to add you to my favorites. You are just such an amazing poet.
5/5
~gabriella