This poem was actually really good and i liked it alot :) i LOVED the ending. it is so touching and sad.

Hot damn nicole
lol.
you are one hell of a rhymer, it's ridiculous.
it takes me ages to rhyme and here you are with like a gorgeous rythm and beat...
this poem flowed so well and i looved the whole 11:11 thing. it was really unique.

oh and this:

hoping these frozen lips
can't shatter your fragile soul
and this runaway mind
will somehow make you whole

was amaaazing.
i love you.