Wow dawn. wow. i disagree with musicality. but of course i do. this is great. so emotional. hun, if you ever need to be picked up off the floor, im here. ok? don't ever EVER forget that.

Awwwww so sad but nonethe less I liked it.

I really liked this poem the style is different which makes it unique to you
Great job!
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The emotions are very powerful in this. It is sad though to read about someone being pushed down and kept down. Very good job though.