Yes, it is true. when you love someone, they should come first. but you must also take into consideration, your feelings, because they also matter. you should try to find someone new also. |
by Live WeLL
Another very powerful poem.. i love how you ended it with a "right?" ... it really gets you thinking.. and of course when you love someone they should come first... |
by Lemma
Oooooo I love the ending, completely turned the poem on its head. It's really sweet and selfless and then at the end it leave the reader wondering. Very clever. My favourite stanza was: |
by Blissful
I loved the question at the end because it left me wanting more. The emotions were real and my heart ached while reading this because I could relate. Well done *5/5* |
by StandStill
Wow. this is an amazing poem. i so understand it. letting them go is hard. and second guesses don't help. this sent aches into my heart. because i know this. great, amazing poem |
by The Queen
Whats sadder than to hear a broken heart's misery..I liked how the poem was constructed and the punctuation marks added the intensity of the emotion....You have a very unique way of writin and releasin your feelings..Good Job.. |