by Faithless Watermelon Mar 8, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I wish that I could just leave you alone, |
by Jyoti Rawat
It well good. good work but painful |
The way this was written was amazing. You've managed to use 2 different lines "Because I don't want to hurt you anymore" and "I wish that I could leave you alone" in every other line effectively. This has a lot of emotion, and it's very well written. 5/5 and I'm adding you to my favs! Great work! |
by FallingAngel
Great job the emotions are powerfull yet subtle. you did an awesome job.5/5 |