Hurts

by Jo Anna EL   Mar 8, 2008


You with her.
The smiles the laughs.
The passion you show.

But when you look at me...
You hide in a blizzard of snow,
You wont even show your face.

Kill me now with your deadly love mace
Cant you see truth???
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

And seeing you with her
After our love,it hurts...

*not nearly as good as my other ones but my friend wanted one and I had no time...*
~Jo Anna EL

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I understand exactly how this feels. And I hate this feeling, it's soOo frustrating right?! But anyway. again, short and simple, but still great and nicely worded. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This actually IS pretty good. not the best, but you know what i mean? the reader can feel the emotion that you are trying to convey. thank you for the comment on my poem as well. God bless!

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