by Faithless Watermelon Mar 8, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
The world around us makes us all too weak, |
by BlueJay
This not only speaks your mind, but tells the truth. I really think its a piece of perfection. The word choice tells your story but also carries the flow and adds something unique to the piece. I love how your voice is in everything you write, and this is definably not an exception. Great job, 5/5 |
by Abha
Your sensibility of understanding the world is so true, a reflective and beautiful poem |
by Faye
This is an awesome poem!! Everythin was so true. I loved it. And yet i read all of your poems and i love them. your an amazing writer keep it up. |