This is an awesome poem!! Everythin was so true. I loved it. And yet i read all of your poems and i love them. your an amazing writer keep it up.

Your sensibility of understanding the world is so true, a reflective and beautiful poem

This not only speaks your mind, but tells the truth. I really think its a piece of perfection. The word choice tells your story but also carries the flow and adds something unique to the piece. I love how your voice is in everything you write, and this is definably not an exception. Great job, 5/5