Comments : Threw it all away

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,

    to ponder on the dark gloomy side of life makes us all sad, yet greatful at the same time. I liked this bit the best -
    what would it be like
    to bleed out on the floor
    to never see sunshine
    to feel pain no more

    I also like the ending too. Well done 5/5

    It is great to be alive
    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by devils angel sunrise

    Well either you are a mini version of me or you get way to well what going on with me good job gabby

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    I like but the ending kind of confuses me

    >SheDevil<