It's a great poem but it would probably help if you put more spaces in it. It felt cramped. Other than that it was amazingly powerfull.5/5

This was very good. Very well written. I like to call these "Poetic writes" more than a poem. This kinda has a story to it and it doesn't have a structure for a normal poem. But this is great work, keep it up 5/5

Wow....This was so sad...but it had a certain beauty to it as well in it's sadness. I'm so sorry. This poem had so much strength in it, and feeling. It was amazing. I'm adding it to my favorites. 5/5
~gabriella

Breathtaking. It left me speechless. The pain, the amount of sadness went right into me and down my spine. Brilliant. Keep it up!

Very well done my friend ... very well done.
As touching and as sad as the poems is ... I can honestly say I've been there before.

Awesome work keep it up !

Omg i dont care wat anybodi says dat was GREAT. N usually i dont like stuff dat doesnt ryhme but dis HAS 2 b an exception

This was really deep.
i felt as if i was almost there.
keep it up

Wow. This was very good. I really like it. You did an excellent job.

I really like this poem wat inspired you to right it?

That was a great poem i felt all da emotion in it!
xo