Very hot well written, You have a really good flow. And your really good at erotic poems. You know how to write it raw without it being blunt.

Once again you have me all hot and bothered early in the morning! I need to stop reading these until I have someone to take care of me afterwards lol. Keep writing them though, I can always take a cold shower :)
5/5

Its 15 degrees outside, but its hott in here!!

WOW! That was a very bluntly written poem, but not too blunt that it makes it seem like a porno. This poem makes me frisky! Oh man.
5/5!

-Alyssa

I really liked this poem...i hope you dont mind but i just got 2 show this poem to my boyfriend so he can see where some of my inspirations come from...check out some of my erotic poems and tell me what you think

Nice. very expressive. good job. turned me on =]

You certainly have a talent for writing erotic poems! Knowing the author and who she writes them about makes it even more exciting, but I won't mention his name here :D
5/5

A bit more graphic than your previous ones, but well written and not too explicit. I'm willing to try writing one together if you're still interested...have to keep myself open to new things ya know :)

Got damn....you get alot of love from the lady's im thinkin bout doing a nasty poem i wonder what kind of feed back i can get...i aint gone lye though you did that one patna...keep doing ya thang your going to shine one day

Wow...more porno than erotic, but strangely arousing I must admit. and powerful.