Once together

by David   Mar 8, 2008


You once said to me
i was the only one you loved
"forever we will be"
is what you said to me

We were to be together
for an eternity or two
everything would be better
is what i felt with you

Married we were to be
forever bound as one
You, the only one for me
Souls entwined, beneath the sun

You sent it all away
just from what you said
even from what you did, i didn't sway
all at once it went away

I don't blame you for what you did
i still stand here waiting for you
from all the feelings you hid
thinking there was nothing you could do

eventually at the end of time
Maybe we will end together as one
maybe not this life of mine
Maybe another life, under this sun

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kalika

    Hello Sweety, how are you?

    I read this poem several times; I found it so beautiful. Such a sad story. In the first part of the poem, I love how you portrayed the happiness this person brought you, while having the sad undertones as well. You depicted your love, happiness, and true sadness absolutely wonderfully. The most powerful part of the poem, in my opinion, was the last portion:

    eventually at the end of time
    Maybe we will end together as one
    maybe not this life of mine
    Maybe another life, under this sun

    To me, this was the most heartbreaking part. You are still holding on to some hope, regardless of how much pain she has caused you. It is so touching.

    Great job love! 5/5

    ~Kalika~

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    Aww that is so sad. She just broke it off just like that? how strange. Nice poem. Don't give up looking...

    XxXKristie MarieXxX

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