I like it very good, especially if you just wrote it for class!

Very good write. The flow was wonderful (not all over the place like most) Also, the emotion and the fact that person behind the voice was actually torn between her parents and her love was perfect throughout. Overall, perfectly and beautifully written =)
5/5

xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx

I know this poem is not true, but i can really relate to it seems as though I had been in this position once before. It's a excellent poem if you only had written it for your class. I bet they enjoyed it :)
I like how you don't tell us as well which way you chose, and that you leave us to figure it out. Gives the reader that little bit more. Great poem.. Keep up the good work.

XoOrdinaryGirloX