by MyMuse Mar 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
**Please read the whole thing to understand it** |
by Amber
Very Strong and Like the presnet was sad I mean why do families change like that? |
by EmoKitten
Ahhhhh, this is so good..and sad.. at the same time, i got goose bumps while reading it, feeling the emotions , *sighs* i m sorry about that...ur father changing and all, i wish u good luck for a happy end :) i really do.. and i think i know very well. how it is to ,lose' his father.... well i dont want to talk about it in a comment lol, so maybe an other time ;) but hell ITS DAMN GOOD the poem i mean :) |
by Love vs Fate
O.O omgosh, i love it, so much emotion. wow sis your such a great writer and a poet! |
by unblue skye
Wonderful poem sister. Bitterness and love played a huge part...it made meh cry! X.x hah I want u and ur dad to spend sum quailty time together! u need to tell him, DAD I NEED SUM TLC! Tell him wut is going on. Tell him ur suspiciousions....i no it may beh hard, but sumtimes u need to do it. I do it to my dad...to my mom? itz impossible. she wont listen :P but anyway, in this poem, i felt the rivalry of love and hate. |
I don't know about other people but upon reading this i get a very negative picture from this. :S |