Canvas
by Lauren Waszkiewicz Mar 8, 2008
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Paint the canvas of life with a rainbow of hues: |
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16 years ago
"Paint the canvas of life with a rainbow of hues:
from the color of the setting sun,
to that of the morning dew."
WOW hehe only ONE line to go over? haha
well I loved it to be honest, it was very pretty.
One thing is I would love to have read more.
You left me hanging!
:(
PM me if u ever write on from this
and yet again
well done
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16 years ago
by Sarah
Beautiful! Very short and gorgeous!!!!!!!!
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16 years ago
by Nobodys Hero
Very short yet it stands out
Great job
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16 years ago
by Tripp
This one stanza seemed so great...and unfortunately, that was it :( haha. You've haveeee toooo add more. Despite the fact that this is all you have, it looks very promising :).
And no, I do not recognize you...oddly enough haha. No clue how I got on your buddy list haha.
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16 years ago
Very good job on writing this. Although it was short, it had a beautiful flow, and the concept was deep. Very great job 5/5
