You can't escape

by deadly sun   Mar 9, 2008


I am your shadow
I've been watching you
knowing your every thought
and doing what you do

you take me to the park
then walk me to the shops
I'll copy your every movement
until the day you drop

you cannot lose me now
and i think you never will
I've been with you through health
and beside you when your ill

that person you call your partner
is nothing compared to me
i will never leave you
i will not let you be free

i follow you every day
from the cockerels crow
and will continue doing so
its the curse of the shadow

(i still need to put in grammer)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Happy With A New Start

    Wow out of 10 i give this a 20 lol it was god really made me think of what i'm going through lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Oooh, Youve turned such a natural thing into something really... eerie and disturbing!!!

    Very clever-very well done.

    5/5
    Aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    Cool poem! i loved it, i give it a 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    OMG Its cute, i enjoy it lol ((5))

  • Very very good.i loved it:)