Very amazing write! I loved every line of it! The flow was great, the word choice was good, and the concept was brilliant! Not to mention the way it grabbed me while I was reading it! 5/5

This is a wonderful write...
great flow... well described..

"And running till I fall over
But nothings going to work
I've fallen way to far.
I've fallen into darkness
To far to escape. "

^^ liked this part the most... it reminds me of the times when i just want to turn back time... when i wish to change something only to realise that its too late...

good job....

keep writing..