I MISS YOU!

by Mackenzie   Mar 9, 2008


I miss our silly nicknames
I miss our friday nights
I miss our laughs
I miss our fights

I miss our insiders
I miss our craziness
I miss our stupidity
I miss us being faultless

I miss you mostly
Because you were my best friend
And we promised we would be like that
Until the very end.

So I guess this is the end
Even though I hate it
I really don't know what's wrong
But I just can't stand it.

I don't know if it's me
Or if it is you.
But I kinda feel like Tigger
That's lost his friend Pooh.

If it's my fault i'm sorry.
If it's yours... well i forgive you.
All i know is
I really do miss u.

**this is true. i hope it helps someone out there. if u have any suggestions or criticism. i am open to it all. thnx. && i love u all. lol.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kelso

    First of all thanks for the comment =],
    and i really like this poem and i know what its like and im kinda gonna through it right now. so if you need to talk im here for you. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    Amazing job, if anything I would just spell out the words like "you" and "though" because slang spelling takes away from the actual poem, but the emotion and the writing is amazing. "but i kinda feel like tigger
    that's lost his friend pooh"- this is an amazing line:) I also like how you don't care who's fault it is, you just want to be friends again that's what true friendship is about

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow i absolutely love love love this song i mean i it made me think of that special person imediately! and i loved the ending babe i mean seriously it was perfect it shows how no matter why it fell apart or whos fault it was you dont care its not important all you want is the relationship back....anyway 5/5 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wonderful poem, written by a wonderful sister! lol.. you did great on this, the flow was a little off at times, but oh well! the message made up for it! Again, you did great. keep it up, and hang in there, i know your a strong girl, but if you ever need to break down. im here for you always! again, great job on this! :]

    ILY!
    Kristina
    Your big sis! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizz

    I liiked ur poem cuz it brings back memories when i had a TRUE best friend....

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