I hope u liked this poem. i worked hard on it. thanks for rating/commenting/looking at it.

i love u all,
mac.<3

Oh i know how you feel

I like it alot.its REALLY good!!!

XxAshleyxX

I love this poem so great really reminds me of on of my friends that moved! :) 5\5

I miss our silly nicknames
i miss our friday nights
i miss our laughs
i miss our fights...

a perfecttt quote :D:D...love it really :D...

This poem is so great. keep it up

I liiked ur poem cuz it brings back memories when i had a TRUE best friend....

Wonderful poem, written by a wonderful sister! lol.. you did great on this, the flow was a little off at times, but oh well! the message made up for it! Again, you did great. keep it up, and hang in there, i know your a strong girl, but if you ever need to break down. im here for you always! again, great job on this! :]

ILY!
Kristina
Your big sis! :]

Wow i absolutely love love love this song i mean i it made me think of that special person imediately! and i loved the ending babe i mean seriously it was perfect it shows how no matter why it fell apart or whos fault it was you dont care its not important all you want is the relationship back....anyway 5/5 <3

Amazing job, if anything I would just spell out the words like "you" and "though" because slang spelling takes away from the actual poem, but the emotion and the writing is amazing. "but i kinda feel like tigger
that's lost his friend pooh"- this is an amazing line:) I also like how you don't care who's fault it is, you just want to be friends again that's what true friendship is about

First of all thanks for the comment =],
and i really like this poem and i know what its like and im kinda gonna through it right now. so if you need to talk im here for you. 5/5.