Woooow! Wow, wow! Mind-blowing piece! Every line posses so powerful inner beauty, you left me speechless with grotesque brilliance which you created in this one. First stanza has one of the most captivating starts that I read in a long time and ending is simply outstanding! Very vivid poem, imagery is absolutely impressionable.
Whole poem is nearly perfect, I just don't like word-firey- in third stanza cause I personally think that you could use some more effective and unique word.
I must say you have impressive metaphors and you wrote a masterpiece! I'll put this in my favorite poems, amazing job, once again!
You are truly talented.