Lasting love

by Nelle   Mar 9, 2008


I love it when you touch my face
When you're around my heart starts to race
You soothe my soul, and calm my heart
Your love is what keeps me from falling apart

When you touch me I start to suffocate
Being around you is a wonderful fate
My heart knows when you come around
Because your love makes me so overwhelmed

I love when you touch my stomach and hands
When you come around I'm a girl no one understands
I don't trust anyone else with my heart
I've been in love with you right from the start

I love the power I feel when you touch me
It's like when you're around I am free
You hold my heart with so much pride
As long as you love me I'll never be pushed aside

I love it when you touch my face
When you're around my heart starts to race
You soothe my soul, and calm my heart
Your love is what keeps me from falling apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Cute one , i love it and how you end it like you start, i can see that your felling is much strong, and keep it for long, great jop

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    OMG , i so relate to this poem. I loved the way you described how this mysterious person makes you feel...

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is so cute. I loved it. You did a great job. Lol it makes me all smushy inside.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    This is a really good poem. I like how you repeated the first part and also made it the ending. It ends the poem off really good. How you describe everything is good too. The last sentence
    "Your love is what keeps me from falling apart" I like how it just sums up the whole poem yet it makes you want to read more. Plus thats how i feel but yeah. Good poem. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww, this was a really sweet loving poem. You can tell how much love you have for this person. The flow in this one was a little rocky though, and so were some of the rhymes. I can't really relate to it right now, but I bet a lot of people can.

    Being around you is wonderful fate
    ^^I think you meant "Being around you is a wonderful fate". Just a little typo, hehe.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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