Awww, this was a really sweet loving poem. You can tell how much love you have for this person. The flow in this one was a little rocky though, and so were some of the rhymes. I can't really relate to it right now, but I bet a lot of people can.

Being around you is wonderful fate
^^I think you meant "Being around you is a wonderful fate". Just a little typo, hehe.

Keep writing!
Cayce

This is a really good poem. I like how you repeated the first part and also made it the ending. It ends the poem off really good. How you describe everything is good too. The last sentence
"Your love is what keeps me from falling apart" I like how it just sums up the whole poem yet it makes you want to read more. Plus thats how i feel but yeah. Good poem. =]

This poem is so cute. I loved it. You did a great job. Lol it makes me all smushy inside.
5/5

OMG , i so relate to this poem. I loved the way you described how this mysterious person makes you feel...

Cute one , i love it and how you end it like you start, i can see that your felling is much strong, and keep it for long, great jop