Razor

by Kitten   Mar 9, 2008


I got the blade in my hand,
Ready to press it on my wrist.
I got tears in my eyes
And I'm thinking about suicide.

I cut so deep, I bleed for hours,
Lying on the floor,
I'm not sure what I should do.

Should I call someone for help
Or should I just lay here and die?
Would it even matter to anyone?
Would anyone even cry?

I don't see a reason for living,
There's no point in life,
I've got nothing good going for me.

So I'll just lay here in my blood,
And bleed till I die.
Nobody will even care that I'm gone,
I won't be missed by anyone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Thats not true that nobody will miss you, I'm sure you have plenty of friends and family who would beh eartbroken if this happen. In my personal opinion calling for help in this situation would do no good because the only person who can help you is yourself. Good job on this piece, you let people into your life through your poetry and that is often hard to do...5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Should I call someone for help
    Or should I just lay here and die?
    Would it even matter to anyone?
    Would anyone even cry?
    --describes the confusion of the suicidal well
    I won't be missed by anyone
    --friends and family would
    good poem,just like how well you described the struggle and your thoughts

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    Wow great poem! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mater

    You have pretty good poems:)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    I love this poem becos its like me and its well written!
    love it!
    xo

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