Wow, that was really powerful, i forgot where i was for a second

I really understood this.

Why can't they leave me be
Why can't I just be me

^ i feel this every day. the world wants me to be the way they want me to be. not who i AM. and that causes everyone who tries to give into the world to die slowly inside. we lose our vibrance, our beauty, our essence. and it is a sad fate, to fade away. this was a great poem. i clearly felt the feelings you portrayed. i also saw the images. keep up the great work. ^_^

A good read full of sorrow and pain, well expressed emotions through out the entire poem. Needs some work with the flow and rhyming but you have come along way from your first poem, which is fantastic to see. Keep up the good work!!

Wow, really good poem.
U can really relate to it.
lots of emotion.
good work

Crazy, but really passionate and good...5/5

Really deep and good. i like it. 5/5
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I totally know what u mean especially:
The smile that showed for my fears
I do that everyday....
Awesome Job

I believe this poem hit its mark in the dark category. The feelings expressed seemed very genuine, or at least they were written by someone familiar with the common feelings of a longing for acceptance plus a feeling of fading away.

Why can't they leave me be
Why can't I just be me

^ this is how i hv felt sometimes...

I don't even know who I've become
A girl without a reason to go on

^loved the lines..

impressive and beautiful poem... good work..

We all change.....some in ways that twist and break our hearts....

I love rhyming couplets :]
it has a nice wee flow to it
very well written
and some strong pharses :]

I must say, this poem has so much emotion! and yet i also want to say, we do change that is a proven fact, whether good or bad we all do change some point in our life. so cheer up keep your head up things will get better through time ^.^ like my favorite mato...keep moving forward!

There comes a time in everybodies life when they get to the point where they just have to move on and find something new/better. Often times it takes people years to realize that the thing they were searching for all those years was themselves. A couple lines in the poem don't rhyme and the flow is shakey at times, but the overall wording and meaning when you look past that is strong. I gave it a 4/5 I hope you don't mind, thought you'd rather have an honest comment then a lie. Great job though overall :) GG23

I have to say this poem is brilliant the show of emotion is just breathtaking the flow was ok but the best part i would have to say would be the fact that its so deep you know and once again i can relate to it great work 5/5

Great expression of the way so many feel 5/5