These Black Wings

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Mar 9, 2008


I may be the angel
That guards your heart
Let the healing begin
Let the flying start

But with broken wings
I can not fly
But I can hold you tight
And let you cry

Let tears flow
Take away the hurt
Like a white sheet
Become free from dirt

Let my black wings
Wrap around
Let them be the night sky
Let them surround

I speak to you
To have no fear
Arms around
I pull you near

Wipe away another tear
Please look into these changing eyes
Believe my words
They aren't lies

These words I swear
That they are true
If I'm your angel
Then your mine too

*to Breanne*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very very beautiful poem! i loved it i could never write something so short yet so powerful and amazzing i love the message that you may not be perfect and can't give everything but you will give what you have and make it count : ) thats what matters 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    This is beautiful and reassuring. i could feel how much you cared for this girl in your writing. rly poured your whole heart into this one. well done. rly!

    p.s. this girls pretty darn lucky!

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww, this is sooo sweet! u better give this poem to her! it's soooo sweet! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    But with broken wings
    I can't fly
    I can hold you tight
    And let you cry

    ^this was my favorite part. because this is basically the essence of what a friend IS.

    the third stanza (or whichever bout the sheet) didn't really match the poem (first negative thing from me!!!) it was good, but i dunno. it just kinda stuck out to me....

    i love the last stanza. it was so sweet. breanne is a very very lucky girl. she must be an angel, because mr tomato, you are an angel. ^_^

    enough reading material?

    5/5

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