But with broken wings
I can't fly
I can hold you tight
And let you cry

^this was my favorite part. because this is basically the essence of what a friend IS.

the third stanza (or whichever bout the sheet) didn't really match the poem (first negative thing from me!!!) it was good, but i dunno. it just kinda stuck out to me....

i love the last stanza. it was so sweet. breanne is a very very lucky girl. she must be an angel, because mr tomato, you are an angel. ^_^

enough reading material?

5/5

Aww, this is sooo sweet! u better give this poem to her! it's soooo sweet! 5/5
xoxo
~me~

This is beautiful and reassuring. i could feel how much you cared for this girl in your writing. rly poured your whole heart into this one. well done. rly!

p.s. this girls pretty darn lucky!

Very very beautiful poem! i loved it i could never write something so short yet so powerful and amazzing i love the message that you may not be perfect and can't give everything but you will give what you have and make it count : ) thats what matters 5/5 <33