Comments : Save me before it's too late, never mind it's already to late.

  • 16 years ago

    by SOxDeepIinxLOvex

    I personally love this poem...i love wen i see poems like this...its so descriptive nd i feel like im am the person goin thru this experience...GOOD JOB!!! Lol :-D

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    This is sad :[

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...that was really good but reallly really sad...i really hope this isnt true but amazing job writing it 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. this sent so many shivers down my spine. i am curious, is this about you, or not? if so, if you ever need to talk, i'm here....

    I still love you mommy
    and daddy.

    Good night forever.

    ^ this is the purity of love. even those who harm you, you love them back. the true essence of how we should live. it's such a hauntingly beautiful phrase...great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, thats pretty strong writing, hope all is ok x good work x

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Whoa that was very dark most of the stuff I have read of yours is light and beautiful good to see u can cover other dimentions