I love this poem, i LOVE IT 5/5 its awsum. its just, ahhh, it took me out of where i am now. words cant describe. not 5/5.... 6/5!!!!

stupid math doesnt let that happen. anyway, please comment on a few of my poems, perferably one of my featured poems, cough*these black wings* cough* romeo and juliete*cough*

i think im coming down with somthin. anyway. thanks in advance/ :P

That is SO sweet. it is just...wow. this is so great......just wow. (i'm speechless, can you tell?) thanks for the comments as well!!!

"And the smile never dares to leave my face."
I love that line(:

very good!

That was so beautiful, and i know exactly what thats like great job 10/5

Again, you have such potential and talent it blows me away, 5/5 with no doubt what so ever!

-mandy :)